Friday, May 28, 2021

Hook

First Mr Ogilvie showed us a video explaining what an introduction contains.

Next, we wrote an introduction and a hook about three different topics. Did you know that the largest firework display ever consisted of 810, 904 fireworks? A firework consists of gunpowder a fuse and potassium nitrate. When these three mechanisms come together they create a colorful explosion in the air.


Then we wrote an introduction about the life cycle of a butterfly. Did you know that there are almost 20,000 butterfly species? The mother butterfly lays eggs and they turn into caterpillars and makes a crysalys and then turns into a butterfly. it takes 9-14 days for a caterpillar to turn into a butterfly.


Then we had to write a introduction about how chocolate is made. Did you know that chocolate is made by cocoa powder? Firstly dried cocoa beans will be roasted, then heated and blended with food coloring sugar and flavouring, When the chocolate is made they will wrap it in paper.


Next time I write an introduction I should to try to add more information about butterfluys, chocolate, fireworks.


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